/*As I ponder'd in silence: Summer sky*/ Poetry Blog

Saturday, May 29, 2010

Summer sky

A sweep of gold --
A slash of crimson --
Few lilac patches in the summer sky
Sunbeam gaze --
Warm breeze --
Like an artist put his canvas to dry
Grey clouds clutter when sweltering winds blow
They steal these colors to paint the next rainbow!

7 comments:

SentiNel said...

Monsoon sky

A bit of dark
A bit of gray
Few flashy beams in the monsoon morning sky
Bit of cold
Kind of dense
One-by-One they (drops) passing by
Make me see things coming back to life
I wish I could be with my wife

Again made this up in last 15minutes - credits goes to you !!!
Nice emotion captured !!!

Meetee said...

lol...good one...thanks :)

SentiNel said...

Do you read poetry ? If yes, I need some pointers !!!

Meetee said...

Not really... I just take some help of google for rhyming words!

SentiNel said...

Oh.. Fine..
NEway, I could have done better with the life-wife rhyming! Anyway, I just did the fitting with the first word came to my mind!!

Just another question...
What does matter to you more.. ideas or words !! I think, you would surely like to comment on this !!

Meetee said...

I think they both complement each other!

SentiNel said...

Simple yet subtle... But that question gave you some escape :)

Now, Let me rephrase,
What is more interesting - Simple idea in great words OR great idea in simple words ??

I know.. U need no examples :)